I changed more in drum patterns like going in tempo. On each line I edit parts of the notes into a fast cymbals . I changed a little with the bass line at the end, which I made half note with tie and slur. I did this changes because going in slow motion is like its not making sense so I revised this in good way.
Axsell, you made some nice changes to this! I like the drum parts. I am not sure why you tied half notes within a measure: you could have just used whole notes. Also, you need to embed a soundcloud gadget with an audio file of your composition. 14/20
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