1-Min Melody Revision 1

I've looked and listen to their melody and some of them sounds good. Otherwise, each of melody looks like smaller than 1-minute and maybe they should make a little bit longer. Even the ending doesn't sound nice; it's like is still going, they should end with cymbals. The drum patterns have some part in slow motion and fast motion repeated. I've looked that their titles should make a little more specific for a better melody.

Here's the link to listen my melody. http://soundcloud.com/user1565134/fountain-of-dreams-rev1

Adding Harmony, Bass Line and Drum Set Pattern

   I chose these chords because I really want to use some part of the notes in tempo. I used the bass line to make it sound more instead of one instrument. For the drum pattern, I created them in repetition to have a nice rhythm and also for the ending, I finished with Cymbals in whole notes. That makes a better ending melody.

Here's the video for this melody